Work of Art Episode Five: Art That Moves You

by Paddy Johnson on July 8, 2010 · 224 comments

A viewer in front of Jaclyn Santos' Male Gaze commentary art work

What’s Work of Art’s biggest failure so far? This show has so many problems there’s undoubtedly more than one right answer but last week’s challenge and resulting eliminations left me feeling like it was their ridiculous assignments. Nothing’s going to top the shock and awe challenge in the bad idea department, but this week’s Let-New-York-be-Your-Muse-With-Audi didn’t do much to convince me that assessment was inaccurate. That is, until the results started to roll in. Kudos to this episode’s guest judge, realist painter Richard Phillips for offering a much needed increase to the level of discourse, but not even he’s been able to put a crack in editing that makes Abdi Farah look like a voice of authority and Erik Johnson a wise man toughened by life.

Like Mile’s jab at Judith’s so-called sanity issues last week — a completely constructed narrative legitimizing her exit — the editors go out of their way to remind us they made the right decision. “There’s no room for error any more” Abdi earnestly tells the cameras now that five artists have been eliminated. I’ve heard this sentiment uttered by cast members on almost every other reality show, so if it weren’t for Abdi’s genuine belief in the show, I’d call this a planted line. He follows this sentiment with, “The more open the challenge the harder it is to come up with a good idea.” thus foreshadowing what I’m certain will be a poor solo exhibition should he be chosen as one of the final three contestants. Younger artists like Abdi seem to do better on this show, perhaps because school makes them more accustomed to following instructions.

As for the studio, with more artists eliminated, the show has time to follow a few more character narratives and disputes. Miles and Nicole flirt, Erik offers surprisingly fair character assessments while talking smack about other contestants (last week’s homophobic comments do not sit well with us), and Nicole, Jaclyn and Peregrine deal with sharing a new room together. Nobody has yet commented on Mark Velasquez predilection for making painfully obvious observations. “Either way, the group will be eight” opines Velasquez, as if inevitability of elimination weren’t already known. He’s also good for the off-handed criticism, “That’s amateurish”, a comment I’m not sure he even understands as he used it last week to describe Nicole’s baby penis-like thumbs.

In other delusional statements offered up this week, a studio scene showcases Jaclyn talking about her art school 101 project “the male gaze plus me in the Audi forum = the Panopticon” followed by Abdi’s ridiculous conclusion, “Jackie’s a great artist”. That Jaclyn remains on the show at all, signals the show’s utter disinterest in accurately assessing the cast member’s work.

SPOILER ALERT: So does the fact that she won this week’s challenge. “I think there’s some growth in your work” says Bravo judge Jerry Saltz generously, a sentiment that may have some truth in this instance, but seems a little less credible, when you remember that said “growth” has occurred over approximately six days on Bravo’s sets. Once again, when this show isn’t failing artists with its uninspired challenges, it does so in its assessment of the work. Speaking to this, the first person that needs to be eliminated on this show is China Chow. (kudos to c-monster for calling that one right off the bat) “This is just way too literal. I don’t get what you’re trying to say here.” she says of Ryan Shultz’s self portrait in a car. What she meant was that it was a painting with only a surface read, but she’s not the most brilliant speaker in the world so she produced a statement in which one clause contradicts the other. Not that we needed any further proof of the matter, but only a couple contestants later she demonstrates she’s also not a particularly deep thinker. “I don’t know what I’m looking at.” Chow complains of Jaime Lynn’s work, “Is it a hub cap, is it a record, it’s kind of all over the place.” That piece had a lot of problems, namely sloppy conceit and visualization, but not being able to identify what it was, isn’t one of them.

Thankfully, I doubt China Chow has too much sway in the actual judging, which sadly seems more heavily weighted in the hands of the producers than other shows. As per usual this episode’s list of winners and losers demonstrates this point. A few thoughts below.

Jaclyn Santos, "11-17"

THE WINNER

Why is Jaclyn Santos work in the top two? She photographed men looking at her, put paint blobs on their faces “as means of empowerment”, and added a couple mirrors to reflect the viewer’s gaze. This is art school male gaze 101. No matter. “I love the triangle you’ve created, where the viewer, they’re looking out at us, and you are the one who has to complete the pictures.” says Jeanne Greenberg Rohtayn. This doesn’t even make any sense.

Nicole Nadeau's "Suspension"

THE REAL WINNER

How is it no substantial conversation occurred about Nicole’s sculpture “suspension”, a light crusty object marked by the sounds of her journey. This piece is much better than most of the work I’ve seen on her website, much of which apparently was made in school. Nadeau’s been creating relatively strong work for this competition — it’s time to start talking about her a little more.

LEFT: Miles Mendenhall, "Untitled", RIGHT: Peregrine Honig, "Raudi"

THE RUNNERS UP

Miles Mendenhall and Peregrine Honig each created thoughful pieces.  Admittedly I have a difficult time with Honig’s illustration-y style, but at least all her work is intelligent, which is more than I can say for a lot of the remaining contestants.

LEFT: Abdi Farah's "Glory" RIGHT: Jaime Lynn Henderson's "Turn it Up"

THE ELIMINATED – JAIME LYNN HENDERSON

Fare enough. I suppose ten dancing Jaime Lynn’s on a wheel of New York is worse than Abdi’s hamy self portrait as a race car driver, but just barely. Jeanne Greenberg Rohtayn offers up the most valuable criticism of the piece saying, “It has no sex, it has no speed, and it has no status, all things you would get from the car or the rap music [you were listening to].”

Mark Velasquez, "From Above"

BEST ARTICULATED CRITICISM

“It’s important to make a declarative statement.” Richard Phillips tells artist Mark Velasquez who’s painting had earlier been described as boring hotel art. There’s probably room for debate on this point, but in this context, I’d argue this is a far better starting point for the evaluation of contemporary art than Bravo’s search for how it makes you “feel”.

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  • kelli williams

    Who the hell is China Chow?

    • Molly

      The daughter of some 1980s NYC art collectors/scenesters. Her mother was Tina Chow, notable for being one of the first straight women to die from AIDS.

  • kelli williams

    Who the hell is China Chow?

    • Molly

      The daughter of some 1980s NYC art collectors/scenesters. Her mother was Tina Chow, notable for being one of the first straight women to die from AIDS.

  • http://www.cameandwent.com/tgnprojects.html Trong from the Outside

    Okay, I can’t get over that there is such an inflation of angry energy around this show, with individuals acting completely defensive and insulting for all the worse reasons. But I guess that has always been my problem with WANGA as well, that this type of non-constructive emotional aggression gets the better of substance.

    Nobody here really knows one another, so the personally accusative stuff is obnoxious to read.

    I told someone a few weeks ago that I partially did the show just for the fun of it, and his narrow response was something like “how is it that your aspirations are to just have fun?” I responded with “It was a few days out of my life. I would hardly consider that much of investment towards my aspirations as an artist.”

    Jesse Martin.. I didn’t know I looked so “disgraced” walking around Chelsea…. Please say hi next time, and you might enlighten yourself. It wasn’t the Magical Elves space and time continuum I was dragging behind me, it was just my ass.

    Point being, is it so impossible to have a serious discussion and not lighten up a little? Bravo edits the hell out of everyone on the show… So please, don’t confuse real world personalities with reality tv personalities.

    • http://jessepatrickmartin.blogspot.com/ Jesse P. Martin

      @Trong: The “inflation of angry energy” is called WANGER. And I agree: it is a strange, unwieldy, and altogether unnecessary force.

      You did not look the least bit “disgraced” (I said “disgraced Trong” in complete jest, as if being voted-off of WANGA was like being excommunicated or dishonorably discharged). And the space/time continuum was, admittedly, a total fabrication (but you were on your cell phone, which is sorta like a rip in the space/time continuum?). I will high-five you and seek enlightenment if fate crosses our paths again.

      I’m actually having a lot of “fun” writing on these comment-threads (Saltz just compared my WANGER to tea-bagger rage because I told Sheila Pepe that WANGA was “a hope-vampire”), and I like how the tone shifts from frighteningly angry and serious to academic to completely absurd. I’m looking at this mostly as a bizarre (if not entirely useless) writing exercise.

      • http://www.cameandwent.com/tgnprojects.html Trong from the Outside

        Thanks for the clarification Jesse… I wasn’t totally sure:-) But had a suspicion you were a fair person… And don’t expect much on my end in regards to any actual enlightenment when we inevitably run into one another:-) Though a high five is in total order…

        WANGER is too much to harbor, but getting WANGRY every once in a while at injustices is okay:-)

  • http://www.cameandwent.com/tgnprojects.html Trong from the Outside

    Okay, I can’t get over that there is such an inflation of angry energy around this show, with individuals acting completely defensive and insulting for all the worse reasons. But I guess that has always been my problem with WANGA as well, that this type of non-constructive emotional aggression gets the better of substance.

    Nobody here really knows one another, so the personally accusative stuff is obnoxious to read.

    I told someone a few weeks ago that I partially did the show just for the fun of it, and his narrow response was something like “how is it that your aspirations are to just have fun?” I responded with “It was a few days out of my life. I would hardly consider that much of investment towards my aspirations as an artist.”

    Jesse Martin.. I didn’t know I looked so “disgraced” walking around Chelsea…. Please say hi next time, and you might enlighten yourself. It wasn’t the Magical Elves space and time continuum I was dragging behind me, it was just my ass.

    Point being, is it so impossible to have a serious discussion and not lighten up a little? Bravo edits the hell out of everyone on the show… So please, don’t confuse real world personalities with reality tv personalities.

    • http://jessepatrickmartin.blogspot.com/ Jesse P. Martin

      @Trong: The “inflation of angry energy” is called WANGER. And I agree: it is a strange, unwieldy, and altogether unnecessary force.

      You did not look the least bit “disgraced” (I said “disgraced Trong” in complete jest, as if being voted-off of WANGA was like being excommunicated or dishonorably discharged). And the space/time continuum was, admittedly, a total fabrication (but you were on your cell phone, which is sorta like a rip in the space/time continuum?). I will high-five you and seek enlightenment if fate crosses our paths again.

      I’m actually having a lot of “fun” writing on these comment-threads (Saltz just compared my WANGER to tea-bagger rage because I told Sheila Pepe that WANGA was “a hope-vampire”), and I like how the tone shifts from frighteningly angry and serious to academic to completely absurd. I’m looking at this mostly as a bizarre (if not entirely useless) writing exercise.

      • http://www.cameandwent.com/tgnprojects.html Trong from the Outside

        Thanks for the clarification Jesse… I wasn’t totally sure:-) But had a suspicion you were a fair person… And don’t expect much on my end in regards to any actual enlightenment when we inevitably run into one another:-) Though a high five is in total order…

        WANGER is too much to harbor, but getting WANGRY every once in a while at injustices is okay:-)

  • Erik

    ahhh… perfect example of why i should have taken a friend’s advice to type a reply and wait a day to click “send”

    it’s probably no secret that i have a temper, and that how i start posting things that can turn mean quickly. i mean no disrespect to anyone. it’s a really strange thing going from nobody ever seeing my art to having it on television. i honestly never anticipated any of the attention because i didn’t think i’d ever get on the show. i’m trying to grow “thicker skin” as fast as i can. i totally realize how my comments can come across more amateur (better yet, immature) than my work so i’ll learn from this.. along with everything else.

    thank you.

    • http://www.judithannbraun.com Judith Braun

      Erik, This is a good note and it takes courage. I hope this implies that you won’t be treating/talking to me like your enemy anymore either. I don’t think I’ve ever said one mean spirited thing about you personally to anyone. Judith

      • Erik

        thanks Judith.. you’ve always been TOTALLY nice to me, and i love talking to you in person… i just get frustrated with typing cause there’s no emotion to it… sometimes i say things that are supposed to be harmless goofing around and they just don’t read that way… :)

  • Erik

    ahhh… perfect example of why i should have taken a friend’s advice to type a reply and wait a day to click “send”

    it’s probably no secret that i have a temper, and that how i start posting things that can turn mean quickly. i mean no disrespect to anyone. it’s a really strange thing going from nobody ever seeing my art to having it on television. i honestly never anticipated any of the attention because i didn’t think i’d ever get on the show. i’m trying to grow “thicker skin” as fast as i can. i totally realize how my comments can come across more amateur (better yet, immature) than my work so i’ll learn from this.. along with everything else.

    thank you.

    • http://www.judithannbraun.com Judith Braun

      Erik, This is a good note and it takes courage. I hope this implies that you won’t be treating/talking to me like your enemy anymore either. I don’t think I’ve ever said one mean spirited thing about you personally to anyone. Judith

      • Erik

        thanks Judith.. you’ve always been TOTALLY nice to me, and i love talking to you in person… i just get frustrated with typing cause there’s no emotion to it… sometimes i say things that are supposed to be harmless goofing around and they just don’t read that way… :)

  • http://qotile.net Paul Slocum

    The most appropriate thing you could say about this show is to completely discontinue coverage of it.

    • http://hexane.org Patrick May

      Here here. It’s not good art. Unless you are planning a series on crummy undergraduate senior seminars, I recommend ending the search for the diamond in the rough.

      • http://www.artfagcity.com Art Fag City

        Sorry guys. I’m a reality show junky so Work of Art coverage remains.

        • Vinness Clemsahn

          I am okay with this and I am eagerly waiting for last night’s recap. Shake a tail feather!

  • http://qotile.net Paul Slocum

    The most appropriate thing you could say about this show is to completely discontinue coverage of it.

    • http://hexane.org Patrick May

      Here here. It’s not good art. Unless you are planning a series on crummy undergraduate senior seminars, I recommend ending the search for the diamond in the rough.

      • http://www.artfagcity.com Art Fag City

        Sorry guys. I’m a reality show junky so Work of Art coverage remains.

        • Vinness Clemsahn

          I am okay with this and I am eagerly waiting for last night’s recap. Shake a tail feather!

  • http://cwroelle.com CW

    Just from reading this discussion thread I wish Trong had lasted a lot longer if not won all together

    • TAG

      Agreed! What a human!

  • http://cwroelle.com CW

    Just from reading this discussion thread I wish Trong had lasted a lot longer if not won all together

    • TAG

      Agreed! What a human!

  • sally

    I’m finally caught up. Highly watchable and full of salacious, cringey schadenfreude! Reminds me of Art School Confidential. I think the idea that this is bringing contemporary art to a larger audience is pretty bogus. Most people have at least one artist of some stripe or another in their life. The show’s not supposed to be educating anybody on anything, it’s just catharsis.

    Those crazy artists! Can’t live with ‘em, can’t live without ‘em.

    I love how so many of us artworld types are unable to ignore this thing, and thus are getting all het up about the relative merits of a lot of really bad art. As TV audience we get to be vicariously in the role of the judges. You’re work is bad…therefore you LOSE! hah hah hah … I am powerful. It’s pretty fun. Declaring winners is less fun — they’re all truly awful (except for that pink time machine thing with the little ladder, that was pretty good).

  • sally

    I’m finally caught up. Highly watchable and full of salacious, cringey schadenfreude! Reminds me of Art School Confidential. I think the idea that this is bringing contemporary art to a larger audience is pretty bogus. Most people have at least one artist of some stripe or another in their life. The show’s not supposed to be educating anybody on anything, it’s just catharsis.

    Those crazy artists! Can’t live with ‘em, can’t live without ‘em.

    I love how so many of us artworld types are unable to ignore this thing, and thus are getting all het up about the relative merits of a lot of really bad art. As TV audience we get to be vicariously in the role of the judges. You’re work is bad…therefore you LOSE! hah hah hah … I am powerful. It’s pretty fun. Declaring winners is less fun — they’re all truly awful (except for that pink time machine thing with the little ladder, that was pretty good).

  • sally

    one more note: Jaclyn Santos is fantastic – I can’t hardly stand it every time she and/or her art is on screen. And then she says stuff and it just gets better. Producer-gold. There no way they can get rid of her before the last episode.

  • sally

    one more note: Jaclyn Santos is fantastic – I can’t hardly stand it every time she and/or her art is on screen. And then she says stuff and it just gets better. Producer-gold. There no way they can get rid of her before the last episode.

  • Jim C.

    It’s remarkable how much agreement there is about which work was strongest, and the common bafflements as to why some were singled out as good or bad. This is the weakness of the show: the failure to articulate the criteria of the judges, the lack of substantial critiques, the focus on the top and bottom two.

    With regard to all the nastiness: One of the things I like about the show is that the contestants are artists–some with maybe more presence of mind than others, but all relatively accomplished and thoughtful in their own way. What a change from run-of-the-mill reality tv! Due to the completely unnatural constraints (not the least of which is “surviving the challenge”), the art is mostly mediocre, sure. ‘Reality’ is quotidian almost by definition: whether you write a daily blog, cook, whatever, always has a cumulative, levelling, mediocritizing effect. Nobody can be constantly brilliant (except moi of course).

    I get the criticism of Mark’s work, but I’m kind of impressed he was able to put that together despite photography as his default medium. Ryan’s stuff has been pretty shitty, esp. this week, but his ability to paint realistic portraits in such a short time is still fairly impressive to any non-jaded observer. Like most of you I thought Nicole’s work was top 2-worthy, but in a way, it was also kind of “meh.” Just putting it all in perspective. I did think Miles’s, again, had the most going for it.

    I guess my point is even the “mediocrity” this show engenders has some saving grace to it.

  • Jim C.

    It’s remarkable how much agreement there is about which work was strongest, and the common bafflements as to why some were singled out as good or bad. This is the weakness of the show: the failure to articulate the criteria of the judges, the lack of substantial critiques, the focus on the top and bottom two.

    With regard to all the nastiness: One of the things I like about the show is that the contestants are artists–some with maybe more presence of mind than others, but all relatively accomplished and thoughtful in their own way. What a change from run-of-the-mill reality tv! Due to the completely unnatural constraints (not the least of which is “surviving the challenge”), the art is mostly mediocre, sure. ‘Reality’ is quotidian almost by definition: whether you write a daily blog, cook, whatever, always has a cumulative, levelling, mediocritizing effect. Nobody can be constantly brilliant (except moi of course).

    I get the criticism of Mark’s work, but I’m kind of impressed he was able to put that together despite photography as his default medium. Ryan’s stuff has been pretty shitty, esp. this week, but his ability to paint realistic portraits in such a short time is still fairly impressive to any non-jaded observer. Like most of you I thought Nicole’s work was top 2-worthy, but in a way, it was also kind of “meh.” Just putting it all in perspective. I did think Miles’s, again, had the most going for it.

    I guess my point is even the “mediocrity” this show engenders has some saving grace to it.

  • Ed

    I’m calling it now – Peregrine Honig wins. The sleeper hit of the season. She’s slightly edgy (panties) but oh so average (panties) and it’s gonna make everyone say, “What?!”

  • Ed

    I’m calling it now – Peregrine Honig wins. The sleeper hit of the season. She’s slightly edgy (panties) but oh so average (panties) and it’s gonna make everyone say, “What?!”

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  • Nikki S

    I’m not actually saying this to be a bitch or anything, but I have a huge feeling that a large portion of the people who have posted comments on this thing aren’t even artists. I mean, of course the people who were on WANGA are artists, but what about a lot of the other people? It just seems to me that all they want is someone or something to talk bad about so they can avoid their own personal problems.

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